Lose Control With Me

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Lose control with me
just this once
close this distance
between us and
breathe the air
flavored by my presence
swallow the fluid vapors
occupied by my entire
unobstructed being
and get as high on them
as you need
to let yourself go

No,
you don’t need your inhibitions
for this primal dance
take your fears off
strip down your reason
and give them up
to the white noise
of this September night
that knows what to do with them
it knows what to do with us
if only we could be
less on our guard
and more in tune with
what we really want

don’t let that
clutter in your mind
hold you back
or those responsibilities
knotted around your fingers
stand in your way
we’ll ask the hushed world
that floats on the silky foundations
of the silver moon
to burn them away
so we can concentrate
on the delicious task at hand

Listen to your heart a little,
big man,
heed the voices of your dreams,
sometimes
they may contain
some of the substance of life
that unites the mechanism of your body
with your undulating soul
and pumps ecstasy
into your veins

I know you don’t think you should.
I know you told me you couldn’t.
But I know you feel it too:
your passion,
so long in shackles,
like needles on the bed
hurting your skin
and you need my desire
to cushion your sweet release

You don’t need to be
strong all the time
weakness is a part of life
and I want you to live with me,
for the moment
concede that I’ve been on your mind
confess your secrets to me,
that you’ve put your hands
in places I have yet to show you
in the privacy of your fantasies
and I will disclose
that I’ve felt your hands there too

let the id take over
indulge in some Freudian slip
of the tongue
and taste me
let us play tag with time
and race each other’s heartbeats
to the finish line

Just let me
and I’ll convince you
there is no room
for hesitation or regret
we will make
love so good
the only questions worth asking
are why we waited this long
and when
we will do it again

11 responses to “Lose Control With Me”

  1. There’s a perfectly good reason why I very rarely write erotic poems, but I still haven’t figured it out. Some poets find it easy but I find it to be one of the most difficult things in the craft.

    I re-read this poem after posting and I don’t think it even qualifies as an erotic poem. Fail! Maybe I’m just too romantic.

  2. Carolina Williams Avatar
    Carolina Williams

    u can do it just try a lil harder lol

    no don’t get me wrong is great work don’t complain i like it lol

  3. Robert Paul Jackson Avatar
    Robert Paul Jackson

    I didn’t realize that i was holding my breath the whole time while reading this. This is why you are my favorite writer~bar none. I’ll have to read this again when I get home. It’s too early for this…lol

  4. Iris, I think this a very sensuous poem; you didn’t “fail.” Sure Paradise will agree and he is one of the “Kings.”

  5. Lovely read and very saucy. It is modest erotica, but I think you want steamy!?! Are you catholic and surrounded by catholic culture? I think the answer to your question, “…but I still can’t figure it out.” is written in your poem. Maybe you are talking to your self in the poem, trying to convince yourself to LET GO!?! To decloak yourself of the nun’s outfit and facade (nun, as in don’t really be gettin’ none)! To let the Wild Orgasmic Inner Whore Free to get naked before the world and prowl on “the sheets” of paper! To stand naked before the world and get your own self off! To flick your clit in the world’s face and thereby say, “I’m badder than you bitch! You can’t tell me jack that would make me doubt who I am! I am open to but beyond your opinions! I am orgasmic and free!”

    If I were there you would definitely drop every single veil and stand before me in no less than Quadruple Nakedness! Hahahahaha!

  6. Suggestive romantic in most cases is better than straight erotic..it leaves more to the imagination…a person can fill in the blanks…I love this…poem….release the BLISS and PASSION within.

  7. I call it “ooo-ooowwee!”

  8. this should be your turf you did better than me 🙂 way better its very very tasty

  9. Iris, I love your ever encompassing passion, wow.

    “close this distance
    between us and
    breathe the air
    flavored by my prescence
    swallow the fluid vapors
    occupied by my entire
    unobstructed being”

    And all this time I thought that it was I alone that was secretly breathing in the essense of my lover. I love the “fluid vapors”.

  10. My Goodness! You are my role model! I wanna be like you!
    Most naughtiest poem read so far…made me giggle throughout!!

    1. [Note: I have imported your comment from my old blog, Nocturnal Wanderings (irisisms.wordpress) to this one (sheisiris.wordpress), because the former is no longer active and I have moved everything to the latter.]

      Thank you very much for the kind words. Your reaction to the poem made me smile. If you enjoy erotic poetry you should check out Isis Sun from Raleigh, NC https://www.gspoetry.com/Isissun/poems/. She is one of the best female erotic poets that I know of. 😉

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